TURN College APPLICATION AGONY INTO
Acceptance LETTERS

Master the Art
of the Essay

A SPECIAL CHARITY EVENT

100% OF PROCEEDS WILL GO TO

THE SHIVA VISHNU TEMPLE: 

VEDIC, CULTURAL & SPIRITUAL CENTER OF SAN DIEGO

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For ALL 10th and 11th graders looking to nail their essay, stand out and show colleges why they’re the perfect fit!

Saturday February 3rd, 2024
11am PST - 7pm PST


ALL ARE WELCOME:
You do not need to be Indian or affiliated with the temple to attend

Getting into your dream school means the world to you.

For years, you’ve been planning and working toward building the perfect college application.

You’ve done the…

2AM study sessions

Back to back extracurriculars
(often eating in the car)

Rounds and rounds of
test prep

Whole summers dedicated to camps, competitions and internships

Crack of dawn and into the night sports practices

… all while sacrificing:

  • hanging out with friends
  • quality family time
  • vacations
  • relaxing
  • sleeping in on weekends

Now the ONLY thing really standing between you and that dream school is the college essay!

Before the pandemic, the essay counted for 65% of the application. 

Now the essay is worth 80% or more, depending on the school.

Since the essay counts for most of the application…

you can't afford to NOT have a strategy for nailing it

The problem is...

There’s so many resources for how to write your college essay like college admissions consulting agencies, the essay prep offered by your school, friends & family that got in last year, essay guides directly from the universities, Google, even your own natural writing abilities. 

Most of what you're told is...

Yet, none are enough to nail the essay. WHY?

It doesn’t matter how well written the essay is, if it isn’t the right story to tell with the right elements included in the story.

A winning essay isn’t about how you write your story. 

The most CRITICAL part to nailing the essay is
what STORY
you choose to tell

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That’s all valid and makes sense, but you might be thinking…

Hi, my name is

Priya Narthakii

FORMER TEEN PEAK PERFORMANCE &
ADMISSIONS COACH

Before the pandemic I ran a successful coaching program helping teens get into top colleges, 100% of everyone I ever worked with got into their #1 top choice school. 

That’s 72 acceptances! 

With the college essay accounting for 80% of application, you can’t afford to miss the mark. 

That’s why I’ve teamed up with the Shiva Vishnu Temple of San Diego in this exclusive charity event, to bring you one of the most powerful pieces of that program to ensure your essay will wow the college admissions board just as much as the rest of your application.

Introducing…

Perfect for 10th & 11th graders who want to walk away with the confidence they have the perfect story for their essay to…

stand out

be authentic

be seen by admissions as the most desirable fit

You will learn…

Choosing the Right Story: The Heart of a Winning Essay

Let’s dive into selecting the story that goes beyond mere words. We’ll guide you in discovering and communicating the unique experiences and dreams that define you, to help you transform them into a captivating story that genuinely stands out. 

Using What You've Got: Making Your Story Pop

Your Energy and Emotions: Learn how to incorporate emotions in a way that makes your essay truly authentic and relatable. So your reader can easily connect with you.

Who You Are: This is all about showing off the real you in your essay. Your likes, dislikes, hopes, and dreams – they all matter.

Your Achievements: Transform your academic and learning experiences into something that’s not just a bunch of facts, but a story that grabs attention.

Enhancing Your Essay with Life’s Experiences

People & Skills: Mix in stories about people who’ve inspired you and the skills you’ve picked up along the way. 

Putting It All Together: We’ll show you how to arrange all the pieces so you have a detailed outline for exactly how to write your story. So that your essay will flow smoothly, like a hit song that you just can’t get out of your head.

Beyond the Essay: Skills for Future Success

These skills go beyond just crafting an impressive college essay; they’re life skills. We’ll prep you with decision-making tools for life’s big choices, whether it’s selecting the right college, exploring career paths, or other important life decisions, all while staying true to who you are.

Walk away with...

The most compelling story for your common app essay AND a list of stories that can be used for supplemental essays
(if you need them).

A detailed outline of your story that acts as a custom formula just for you to follow, so you know exactly what to write for the college essay.
Note: Most students are able to complete their entire common app essay within 2-3 hours after having this outline. Yes, even slow writers.

From an analysis of 1000 essays, 87% of winning essays are from choosing the right prompt. Know exactly which prompt is the prompt that will increase your chances of writing a winning essay as part of that 87%.

The skill to know exactly how to make decisions about important choices & communicate that choice to others. Decisions like your college essay topic, which college to choose, which major to take, what internship to apply for, and even what job to go for.

BONUSES

Success Stacker Energy Model Class

Cliff notes video version of the decision making process learned during the workshop so you’ll always be able to come back to the process when a big decision arises. Watch quick 10 minute video for each part of the process.

Storytelling Mastery Training

This is an exclusive guest speaker training. Learn from a top storytelling consultant for entrepreneurs on the key elements of telling your story and building your essay.

Super Bonus

Personalized Essay Review

Priya will personally review your essay and provide specific feedback so you have certainty that your final essay does in fact have all the components that ensures your story is written as a winning essay.

Frequently Asked Questions

You can absolutely learn from those resources how to write a college essay. A lot of those tips are very helpful but none of those resources guide you in deciding the most impactful story for admissions. 

Or you can attend a workshop with a small group of teens that cuts through the noise and ensures you have the right story for your essay & know how to tell it.

Due to the highly interactive nature of the workshop, attendees must attend live. There will be no replay or recording available.

Absolutely not! 10th grade is ideal because once you know your story, you can match your activities to your story. This is a powerful way to improve your chances of admission.

This workshop is designed for both those who have started their college app preparation and for those who haven’t really gotten started. 

For those who have started this will help refine, organize and hone-in on the details that matter most to your story. 

For those who haven’t started this will help you create a detailed plan that you can follow to craft a perfect story! 

This event has been designed to be immersive. This is like no other seminar you have attended (unless you have been to any events conducted by Tony Robbins). While being highly educational. This seminar is also extremely entertaining. Its a genre of seminars known as edutainment. Who says working on your college app needs to be a drag? Why can’t it be fun, memorable and impactful? It can! 

We will dance, tell stories, do highly interactive exercises together, chant incantations, work in small teams and have major breakthroughs and AHA moments! 

This workshop has been designed with the best methods found in neurolinguistic programming, biohacking and brain science to make sure you absorb the most, retain the most and have the energy and drive to put what you have learned into daily practice!

ALL TEENS ARE WELCOME
REGISTER NOW

Saturday February 3rd, 2024
11AM PST - 7PM PST


Venue:
The Shiva Vishnu Temple of San Diego
Vedic Cultural & Spiritual Center
16315 Pomerado Rd, San Diego CA

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8 Hour Interactive Workshop Live (value $900)

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Q&A Time For Your Specific Questions (value $500)

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BONUS: Experience the Secret to Living is Giving

100% of Your Workshop Fees are a TAX-DEDUCTABLE DONATION to the Shiva Vishnu Temple of San Diego

Total Value – $1400

FOR ONLY $150

(100% OF PROCEEDS WILL GO TO THE TEMPLE)

Priya privately runs this workshop for $300-$600

This is a ONE TIME opportunity!

Don’t miss out on learning what no one else will teach you about really nailing the essay!

RESERVE YOUR SEAT NOW

Turn ESSAY STRESS into SUCCESS!

This process is only for improving your chances and cannot guarantee college admission.

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